MadamLark's Reviews

As the title states, this just feels really juvenile. The motivations, lack of communication, behaviors.... all very childish. It's comedic enough and I'm sure there will be some who like it, but it just didn't seem to be my cup of tea. I tried to give it a fair shake, especially since there's a bunch of free chapters right now, but dropped it in 4 chapters. There just wasn't anything that pulled me in.

The MC is absolutely still a child in her mentality as of that point and she's periodically drawn to look quite young, then randomly drawn as if she's mature. It's confusing and inconsistent. Her fiancé is likewise drawn in the same manner, often child-like but then really mature. The inconsistency is a little jarring. The elder prince seems MUCH older and the way he teases/flirts with her feels weird as heck. Anyway, I'm sure it is meant for a different audience than myself, but I just don't feel like I can rate it as better than average..

I was very glad the FL wasn't a pushover. She was very secure in herself for the most part and the relationship between her and ML felt natural and unforced. I am real confused about chapter 8, though. Not sure if it's supposed to be the end or if it is a cliff hanger for future chapters, or if it is a hook for some other future comic by the author, but it didn't feel like it went with the rest of the story. Overall, well done, though.